
Writing
for the Web
Reading online is very different from reading
print. According to research studies, people read 25% slower from computer
screens than reading from paper (1). That's when they read
at all: many people typically scan online text, searching keywords,
headlines and captions (2). An eyetracking study cosponsored
by Stanford University and the Poynter Institute illustrates how online
readers are drawn to more brief abstracts, and even when reading "full"
articles tend to cover no more than 75% of the material - reading "shallow
but wide" (3).
Therefore, writing for the web needs to be customized for online readers
to be most effective. Good web writing is short, concise, and employs
a variety of "landmarks" to highlight key ideas. Here are a few web
writing basics.
Keep it short.
Online readers are impatient, so be succinct: use 50% less text than
you would use in print, maybe 500 words per page maximum. Try to keep
most if not all of your text "above the fold" on each page to reduce
the need to scroll. Retain plenty of white space around your text. (5)
Group related information.
For longer documents, clump the information into self-sufficient segments
and link by topic, chronologically, by audience, or however makes the
most sense to your readers. (5)
Make text short without sacrificing depth of content by splitting
the information up into multiple nodes connected by hypertext links.
Long and detailed background information can be relegated to secondary
pages; similarly, information of interest to a minority of readers can
be made available through a link without penalizing those readers who
don't want it. (5)
Keep it fresh.
Inaccurate or outdated information reduces the credibility of the entire
site (4). If you don't plan to update often, avoid time-dated
language, like "later this year" or "last semester" (use "academic year
2004-05" or "spring 2002 semester" instead). Flag time-sensitive material
to remember to remove once it's outdated.
Make it 'scannable'
Because online readers tend to scan, simple and direct headlines and
subheads can help people find what they want quickly. Use up to three
levels of heads, and note that descriptive heads with verbs convey the
most information.(5)
Get your key points up front and center.
- Keep it short
- Clump information and link
- Keep it fresh
- Use plenty of graphic landmarks
Use "inverted pyramid" style.
Start with the most important information, followed by short supplementary
information. Stick to one main idea per paragraph, and keep sentences
and paragraphs short. Edit ruthlessly.(6)
Resources
These sites offer relevant research and guidelines for web writing and
usability.
useit.com: Jakob Nielsen's Website
Web Style Guide, 2nd edition
Good
Documents: Techniques
Good examples
These pages offer good examples of how to present text on the web.
Mayo Medical School
The US News & World Report annual school survey online is an easy
way to call up the web sites of other medical schools to see how they
present similar information.
US
News & World Report
Footnotes
- Jakob Nielsen, 1997, Be Succinct! (Writing
for the Web)
- Jakob Nielsen, 1997, How Users Read
on the Web
- Stanford-Poynter
study, 2000
- Stanford
web credibility project
- Jakob Nielsen's
Alertbox: Be Succinct! (Writing for the Web)
- Jakob Nielsen's
Alertbox: Inverted Pyramids in Cyberspace
Prepared for the 3/10/03 webworker meeting by Kap Stann
- revised 9/13/04
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